Task 1 Society 1 essays

Band 5 IELTS Task 1 Essays on Society

Read Band 5 IELTS Writing Task 1 essays on Society with examiner feedback, inline corrections, and Band 9 rewrites.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Band 5 Score Breakdown

6.0

Task Response

5.0

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

Lexical Resource

4.5

Grammatical Range & Accuracy